Zoctornyias Training Grounds Part 2
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We are introduced to Tiffany, a girl of indeterminate age at the very end of this part, we find out that she is seventeen. What does she look like? Where does she live? We never find out, as the author doesn't bother to tell us. We do know that her brother is mean to her.
Her father returns home unexpectedly and he receives a scolding. And then her father invites her to an unwordly school where she will study with representives from all "five worlds" and meet her multiple soulmates. Is this information surprising to Tiffany? Did she know there were other worlds? We don't know, as the author doesn't bother to tell us. What do the other species look like other than being totally beautiful, having great eyes, and looking exactly like girls but being boys? The author seems to be setting the stage for a multi-species free-for-all with Tiffany's body as the playing field once Tiffany, her best friend, and her family make it to the "training ground.
The writing is extremely rough in this story. Basic grammatical principles are completely ignored and the dialogue is beyond stilted I really should have known, as there is at least one word spelled wrong in the item description. Strip everything else away and what you appear to have is a basic wish fulfillment story about a young girl being special and desired, a plot that is easy to find in books that are better written and provide better value for the dollar.
The writing style is very juvenile, a bit like playing pretend with my son, if you can catch my meaning. The story seemed a bit forced, as if this story is meant to go somewhere, and it want's to get there fast. I can't really complain about that, since I honestly believe that a lot of writers tend to follow a standardized template. If it's going to be short, keep it short. Jun 04, Beth, thank you for the friendship.
Nov 26, Nov 15, Thanks for the add, Beth. Nov 14, Oct 19, All of my books are on smashwords as well. Part one of Vultar's heart, body and soul mate is free on smashwords: Oct 16, Hey hey , thanks for adding me up here on goodreads: Oct 11, How is everybody tonight: Sep 28, D hehe made two accounts by accident forgot which email I used the first time lol.
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In return my bond to her pulls and tugs wishing for me to put it out in the open that she is not his and never will be. Kindle Edition , 35 pages. Available in Russia Shop from Russia to buy this item. I am ready for part 2. Write a customer review. Very good story, great detail and unforgettable characters. Claudy Conn Latest book:
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Vultar's Tellianar Part 1 4. Desire and Fate really liked it 4. Zoctornyia's Training Grounds Part 3 4. Ok, to start of with this is a book I got from Amazon when it was free. Which it still seems to be free today while I am doing this review. This book pissed me off in so many ways. The story is a wonderful idea, I loved that, but certain things just Ok, to start of with this is a book I got from Amazon when it was free.
The story is a wonderful idea, I loved that, but certain things just had me fuming mad. I can't say I love the main character, Maritza. I don't even know the word for it. No real struggle involved, just up and kidnapped. Then she is told why she was kidnapped leave that for you to find out on your own but dang, Girl, I would have been like, 'Oh, Hell, No!
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To top it all off, she is going to meet the one who is in charge of her kidnapping and she finds out another before her was there. Guess what that chick did, yup, exactly what I would have done. The first girl put up a fight! Raised hell, then gone. Well without going into details, Lord Elentinus does one thing that puts him on my Top hated males list.
He lied to her, even with her falling in love with him, he goes and does an act I can't even believe. Her reaction to it afterwards is hard to believe Ok, good story, I get why it all happened, still doesn't mean I am thrilled with the characters. I give this book 3 stars. Well, let's see there is a few things in this story that just bored me too much: I just kept getting annoyed with different parts. Ok, one example, I for one did not understand Here it goes.
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Ok, one example, I for one did not understand much of anything with what was going on in the story. Her mother confused me to death. I kept wondering if she was just evil or if she just wasn't good mom material at first Why did she treat the man of her dreams like crap instead of saying more to him. I understand he is good, yet his twin is pure evil I just have an active imagination and all of the details about unimportant stuff was annoying me.
Yet, I still love the idea of the story and would recommend it to people who work enjoy it. This book is not something I normally would read, but I have to admit I am glad I did. It teaches you many lessons about people that we should remember in real life every day. People are not always what you believe them to be, especially if you are be This book is not something I normally would read, but I have to admit I am glad I did. People are not always what you believe them to be, especially if you are believing what others are telling you.
You learn to love characters you never thought you would.. The story starts off as a young woman is burying her husband You feel sorrow for her, but not for long, it turns into you feeling confused about who is the good guy and who is the bad guy. Why is this young woman acting this way?